Saturday, January 30, 2010
Name:
babypaopao
Your graphic (url):
http://i338.photobucket.com/albums/n403/ayingerts/goneposterpng.png------
~Colour/Color 1/3
Somehow, I find the shadow and the outline of the title
really disturbing. I personally think that the outline could be taken of and the shadow could be of BLACK color instead of white color if you still want the shadow, but it's really okay without the the shadow. Yes, white color is a contrast to the colors used in the poster but it's really weird to see white color out of the sudden. And for the quotes, putting the opacity of the font to 100% will make the whole poster look more appealing instead of making it translucent.
As for the colors of the whole poster, I would say that it's really good, but you mentioned that the poster's theme is angst and a little bit of violence, I suggest you to use brighter colors like bright red/orange to bring out the atmosphere more. We can see that the poster's theme is angst/violence because of the background texture you used. By using the colors I've suggested, the poster would be a little more interesting.
~Font 3/3
Your font choice for the title and the quotes are both great, good job ^^
~Image Suitability 3/3
The images suits the theme, it clearly shows that G-dragon is depressed/sad
~Overall layout 1/3
I've seen the review of your other poster and I simple adore your poster because it's simple yet it brings out the atmosphere of the fanfic, but I don't really that you've succeeded in this one. Yes, It's simple, but too empty. Sometimes, empty can be a good thing and vice versa. IF you really want the overall layout to be the same, I suggest you place the quotes in the center right under the title and make the font size smaller. If possible, make it into a line.
You could also try erasing off the border of the picture of G-dragon and make it bigger and place the title BELOW the picture. (provided if G-dragon's picture on the top)
Try something like this http://i49.tinypic.com/161zwis.jpg . I think your poster will look fantastic if it's something like that one. Of course, color scheme should be bright red/orange
Result: 8/12
Extra: I hope this helped you.
Serenity | 1:14 AM
