Saturday, January 30, 2010
Name: cutterpillow
Your graphic (url):
http://i46.tinypic.com/1zvv4nd.jpg
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~Colour/Color: 2/3
I think the colors on the background is a bit on the plain side, not that it's a bad thing.
The background doesn't match it very well.
~Font: 2/3
The font for the title "Ten Days" is nicely placed.
And for the font on the characters they did not go well with the poster.
You could have used the same font from your quote or placed the names elsewhere.
~Image Suitability: 2/3
The theme is happy, but that's all that there is. There is no other feeling...
Of course you can tell there will be romance in it because of the characters so all in all it's good.
~Overall layout: 2/3
The colors matched and all but there is something missing.
I think you could have done better, the background didn't really go wit the two of them.
The guy character could have been smaller to fit well into the whole "front page diary" theme.
You could have turned the background horizontal and made it that way because the guy character blocks the spirals.
And the two characters block the lining from the flower decorative.
Result: 8/12
Extra:
I hope I helped you out, please don't take the grading too seriously.
Serenity | 3:37 AM
