Saturday, January 30, 2010
Name:
jusce
Your graphic (url):
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/8863/fsp.png
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~Colour/Color 2/3
- The color of the font that you used for the title & quote doesn’t suit the theme. Well, based on what I can visualize it, the theme is quite sad & romantic. However, using a cyan/aqua aren’t the perfect color for that... or maybe yes, but it would be better and best if you minimize or lessen the tone of the color.
~Font 3/3
- Great choice of fonts! Even the effects of the title are great.
~Image Suitability 2/3
- The picture on the poster is almost good. But the image you use on the left side (the black one), doesn’t suit it, for the reason that, there are still marks of white background on it. If you’re going to make a poster, I strongly suggest that you correspond on the BG color that you are going to use.
*I.E if its white, then look for a picture with white image.
~Overall layout 2.5/3
- The blending is okay. Even the size of the picture (of the girl) fits your poster.
Result: 9.5/12
Extra:
You’re a great designer. I’ve seen your other works; unfortunately, I could say that this poster is not the best. I don’t know what's the purpose of the overlaying texture (as you can see on the right image's face.) and the texture somehow, don’t match it as well. I’ve seen different and lots of 'dirty/grunge' textures, try to see which texture suits your artwork the best.
Serenity | 3:39 AM
