Saturday, January 30, 2010
Name:
luv_arron
Your graphic (url):
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll151/yalun_r0x/wimtlcopy.png
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~Colour/Color 1.5/3
The colors can be a little TOO overwelming. When I first looked at the poster, it felt like a rush of colors just bursted in my head. A combination of colors, or "rainbow" colors, can be distracting when incorporated on a poster. For your poster theme, it is better to use a more simple set of colors instead of the colorful type.
~Font 2/3
Your font works, but it doesn't quite match up to the theme. And I feel that the quotes on the bottom are a little too bunched up. The hardest thing about creating a poster is probably the typography. What I suggest is making the font more dramatic, example: using motion blur on "Two Siblings; One Girl" but not too dramatic.
~Image Suitability 2.5/3
As for the pictures, there isn't a huge "problem" with it.
~Overall layout 2.5/3
Excluding the color issues, the poster is pretty well put together. There are some areas where the pictures could be blended a little better, but the layout is satisfying. As for blending, I especially love the blend from the picture of arron and the bridge thing underneath him. The color around that area is superb and captivating.
Result: 8.5/12
Extra: Some of the scratch marks are a bit distracting, but I didnt take off points for it just because they're not that big of a bother. And avoid taking a colorful texture and just slapping it on a poster. Some textures have a good "corner" and the rest are a bit "unattractive". So instead of using a full texture layer, erase some of it to modify to your satisfaction. I hope my review helped and will help you in your future creations.
Serenity | 2:48 PM
