Wednesday, February 24, 2010
BBT1 - A Second Chance
~Mood 3/3
The mood for the story is really good.
I can see longing in the characters eyes. :)
~Colour/Color 3/3
The colours are perfect no problem with it at all.
~Font 2.5/3
The fonts for the title is perfect the way it is. For the quote fonts, I don't think you need them to be that big.
You can use something like "Tahoma" or "Platino" and just make them smaller and not that big but other than
that you did great.
~Image Suitability 3/3
I love the blending for this and the images are great. Everything blended well with the textures and the colours
so you have improved :P
~Overall layout 3/3
The positioning of the images are great. The layout is fantastic, you know where to put the characters.
Extra:
It's been a pleasure reviewing you. Hope you don't get offended or get annoyed. Your artwork is great, just make sure
you understand the mood/theme your requester specified. Thank you .
Results:
9/15
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BBT1 - A Second Chance
~Mood 3/3
The mood for the story is really good.
I can see longing in the characters eyes. :)
~Colour/Color 3/3
The colours are perfect no problem with it at all.
~Font 2.5/3
The fonts for the title is perfect the way it is. For the quote fonts, I don't think you need them to be that big.
You can use something like "Tahoma" or "Platino" and just make them smaller and not that big but other than
that you did great.
~Image Suitability 3/3
I love the blending for this and the images are great. Everything blended well with the textures and the colours
so you have improved :P
~Overall layout 3/3
The positioning of the images are great. The layout is fantastic, you know where to put the characters.
Extra:
It's been a pleasure reviewing you. Hope you don't get offended or get annoyed. Your artwork is great, just make sure
you understand the mood/theme your requester specified. Thank you .
Results:
14.5/15
**
BBT1 - A Second Chance-1
~Mood 3/3
The mood for the story is really good.
I can see longing in the characters eyes. :)
~Colour/Color 3/3
The colours are perfect no problem with it at all.
~Font 2.5/3
The fonts for the title is perfect the way it is. For the quote fonts, I don't think you need them to be that big.
You can use something like "Tahoma" or "Platino" and just make them smaller and not that big but other than
that you did great.
~Image Suitability 3/3
I love the blending for this and the images are great. Everything blended well with the textures and the colours
so you have improved :P
~Overall layout 3/3
The positioning of the images are great. The layout is fantastic, you know where to put the characters.
Extra:
It's been a pleasure reviewing you. Hope you don't get offended or get annoyed. Your artwork is great, just make sure
you understand the mood/theme your requester specified. Thank you .
P.S this is way better than the first one.
Results:
14.5/15
Serenity | 8:41 PM
