Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Name: Orphey
URL: http://i39.tinypic.com/295u39z.jpg
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~Colour/Color [2.5/3]
I took half a point off for the vibrant orange-red on Changmin's face. I think if you make it a bit less (overlay/softlight/multiply or whichever layer type you used) on Changmin's face, it would have been perfect. Despite how much I never fancy vibrant use of gold/yellow/orange-brown on graphics, I believe you used it very well in the background. It fits well with the "evening sun" which is your title.
~Font [2.5/3]
I think the title font looks beautiful. You laid it out really nicely. The only critique I have about the font is the small font under it. It doesn't look clean and slick to the eye, I mean I could barely read it at first glance, I really had to look into it. I think it might be better if you used georgia for the small font.
Though I'm not sure if you intentionally put the font on the bottom right corner but that part kinda threw me off a bit. It may have been part of Changmin's picture but I think it would've been best if you had covered it or erased it.
~Image Suitability [3/3]
I don't have much to say here. Images you used looks great. You blended them together nicely as well. =]
~Overall layout [2.5/3]
The girl above Changmin seemed like you added her on just for filling in the space. Remember that sometimes less is more and I mean in terms of picture usage. I believe there would be a more better balance if you did so because then I wouldn't feel everything is kinda dangling on Changmin.
~Extra
I feel that if you added a border to the poster it would create a more complete look to it.
Serenity | 3:05 AM
