Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Name:
withlove*
URL:
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/9364/betweenusguilun.jpg
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~Colour/Color [2/3]
I think that the red color for the flowers in the bottom kind of clashes a little. I can see that it matches with the boy's red hair and the tint in the girl's sunglasses, but those appear to be accent colors. These flowers stand out a little too much to attribute to the accent colors.
Maybe you could've lessened the saturation in them, maybe even a slight gradient effect to keep a little of the red but not much. It's hard to define the mood because of their color. So maybe you could even change the color to a purple-blue or one of the two. But I do love the blue green you have going for the rest of the poster. :] I think that should be the color scheme for the flowers.
~Font [2.5/3]
It's kind of hard to see the title text because of how it blends in with the pictures behind it. I like how you put the larger faded duplicate behind it, that came out nicely. I think the font in lowercase was a good choice for the title.
~Image Suitability [2.5/3]
When I look at this it makes me see the two people as the bad, "too-cool-for-you" stereotype. I like it. X3 The two kissing in the middle is blended nicely, and so is everything else. With the added scratchy texture and the sharpness of everything, helped you pull off the blend. I think it looks kind of vintage-ish. I like that, too. :]
~Overall layout [2/3]
I like how you placed the title, maybe you could've moved it so that it didn't cover up the smoochin couple in the middle. I do like it there, but it's hard to see. Maybe you could put it in the bottom left. The credits look a little out of place, like you just kind of stuck them there. You could've put it slanted like the title and under the title.
Total= 9/12
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Name:
withlove*
URL:
http://i39.tinypic.com/iwm6io.jpg
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~Colour/Color [2.5/3]
I really like the colors you used for this. Very light and easy on the eyes, matching with the title. The only thing I don't like is that I think Junsu's hair is a little too dark and orange. It stands out and doesn't remind me of candy or chocolate.
~Font [2.5/3]
The variety of fonts you used looks nice, the color matches the theme. I just don't like the white texture of words you used behind the credits. It looks a little too messy. You have plenty of other texture and font, so I don't think you needed the texture of words. Maybe to make it look less standout-ish you could lessen the opacity.
~Image Suitability [3/3]
I like the images you chose (or if they were provided for you) either way they're both great. They're happy and the blending you did was nice.
~Overall layout [3/3]
I like how you laid everything out, I still don't like how much Junsu's hair sticks out but I already covered that. You did a great job of laying everything out. :]
Extra: I absolutely love all of the texture behind everything. Looks awesome.
Total= 11/12
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Name:
withlove*
URL:
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vif8us.jpg
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~Colour/Color [2.5/3]
I truely love the pink and light colors on the left, it's the blue that throws me off. Maybe you could've used more of a purple color.
~Font [3/3]
The title font, beautiful. And the credit fonts after it looks very nice. I can tell you like a variety in your work. When I look at the quote, I like it because of the color. But the font is straying a little from the theme. I didn't count off for it because I think the color of it makes up for it. :]
~Image Suitability [3/3]
I think the image choices were wonderful. They were blended beautifully and contribute to the lovey dovey theme.
~Overall layout [2.5/3]
I love how this poster was laid out. Nice use of light texture and color. There's just one small thing bugs me: the little squiggly piece of texture that runs into the guy's head. It distracts me from the great blend.
Extra: Great job!!
Total= 11/12
Serenity | 4:05 PM
