Thursday, March 4, 2010
Name:
HenryLau_fan88
Your graphic (url):
http://i46.tinypic.com/bdp06c.jpg
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~Colour/Color 1/3
You've used a lot of solid colours for this, the only gradation came from the pink to white background. It fails to be varied and makes it seem sort of plain and boring.
~Font 1/3
You only have the one title or set of words displayed here. It's not very appealing or interesting in any way. You can't even tell it's the title of anything, but you would suppose it is because it's the only words there. The colours of the text also do not suit the layout theme, as you've chosen mainly pinks and pastel colours for it.
It leaves a lot to be desired.
~Image Suitability 2/3
So I'm cutting you some slack here, because it is difficult to find a picture that includes all of the members of Super Junior and Super Junior M. I don't think there is any in existence. However you could have chosen a much more tasteful way in how to arrange them. Instead of just grouping them in this manner.
~Overall layout 1/3
As mentioned before, you could have done a better job with the layout for this. It looks very disorganized and a bit amataur. Perhaps next time you could use the rest of the Super Junior group (those that aren't the main characters) and create a border along the top and bottom of it, and have the two main characters in the middle with a title.
Extra:
A bit too pink.
Results:
5/12
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http://i47.tinypic.com/6gwpjd.jpg
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Serenity | 9:21 PM
