Monday, April 12, 2010
Name:
Michelle - Michelleangelo (LOL)
URL:
http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4149/delusion.jpg
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~Colour/Color [2/3]
I like the use of color in this. I also like how the green is faded in with everything. I just don't really like how it sticks out the most in
the middle. It makes it hard to find where you want the eyes to go to first. I think you wanted them to go to the big pic of the girl on
the left, but with how the green kind of cuts through some images, I don't like. I do, however, like how vibrant the colors are.
Maybe you could've done more of a gradient effect with the green to make it fade instead of cutting straight through the pictures.
Also, the bright image in the top right is also distracting. It sticks out and doesn't look like it serves a big purpose.
~Font [2.5/3]
I like the title font, it matches the curly sense with the frill in the images. There's only one thing that bugs me. The font at the top, I
don't like how it trails of onto the girl's face a little. I do like how it runs beside her face, but not over. Since it wasn't totally
noticeable, I didn't take off too much for it.
~Image Suitability [2.5/3]
I think you used images of the same person. I like them all, but the one farthest on the right, above the "Delusion" title. It's edge
stands out and doesn't fit with the picture. And then the bright blue / white one at the top right. I think you should try taking them
out and see how it looks. :] You could even just feather the bottom of the one at the bottom to make it not run over the line kind of
serving as a barrier to the other ones. And for the other, lessen the opacity a little to make it stand out a little less.
~Overall layout [2/3]
The overall layout is nice, I just think that it looks a little cluttered. Like you were trying to just fill up space. I think the blocky
textures fill up enough that you don't need that many images.
Total= 9/12
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Name:
Michelle - Michelleangelo (LOL)
URL:
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/675/allweneedislove.jpg
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~Colour/Color [3/3]
The colors are very nice. I think they suit the soft, mellow theme well. Good job.
~Font [2/3]
I like the curly font you used for the words "All" and "Love", but I think that the other font for the title is a little too simple. Maybe
you could try making it larger to make it stand out more. To make it less contrasting to your soft yet complex theme.
~Image Suitability [1.5/3]
I think these images are all good. I just don't like how different their skin tones are. Because Yunho's nearly red-orange, and Changmin's really pale. And you can hardly see Junsu. It also looks like there are too many heads. I can see you tried separating them with the frame, but I think you should've intensified the difference between the background in the frame, to get a greater difference between the background of the frame and the background of the boys.
~Overall layout [2.5/3]
Everything is laid out nicely, I just don't like the thickness of the orange on the borders. It might be how solid it is. Try using a dashed line instead. Or something more creative
Total= 9/12
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